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Oh how bitter are the tears I shed
Not less the sweetness of the irony
The man with whom I shared my bed
Was gone for good the other day

Oh how,was it him to cross my way,surprising?
And that a silent weep that met my lips
Not less was I amused that day
To see his eyes were full of shame

Oh don't you cry my unloved lover
Don't you cry, didn't you know?
Who breaks a womans heart apart
Deserves a plenty of such woe

And don't you fall apart, cry nevermore
Keep it all locked up inside
So when you break another heart
Step on that shattered glass and shine
©2004-2009 ~Angeliq
:iconangeliq:

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A patheticly wrong poem, one of my tries...the pic took longer than the poem though...more to come...

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:iconkalix:
I love this, it's very vivd. I also love the rough detail of the picture (if you get what I mean because I'm absolutely rubbish at explaining my points), it's so...well all I can say is that there are no words to describe it.

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08 FEB 2005
:iconpureraven:
You are a brilliant poet!! Me is going to favouritise it... The picture is amazing! The way you have drawn the stomach is so real!

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Just as he hit the ground,
They lowered a tow that
Stuck in his neck to the gills,
fragments of sobriquets.
Riddle me this,
three half eaten corneas
who hit the area.
Stalk the ground,
Stalk the ground...
:icondiscanthus:
We've always gotten so very few of your writings that any and every one is treasured. The image was the little hole in the ground before you really hammer a stake in hard. The poem was excellent and extremely impactful, your language use, rythmic pattern and everything was exactly on key.

I love how you can tie your excellent artistic skill in with your use of words, you've got an excellent flair as an arrtist and I'd be thrilled to see more form you:D

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Chris Your Friendly Neighbourhood Psycho

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