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Inner defiance

It's up,It's up,It's up
They will not show up until you know it
Stay down, stay low, the ground
It's shaking
Only the the two of us remain

The sky is just about to burst into this box we're stuck into
You know it,don't you
They don't own you

Escape,Ecape,run away
It's justice
That follows you from anywhere
I wait,I wait,I'm honest
Only the rest is left to take

Don't let the sky explode,in your eyes everything is gold
I know it,too
I don't own you

Your face reflects the empty sky
And when you touch my skin yu dry it
You're brighter than a piece of bliss
It hurts so much...and still I love it
The burning light of yours, does it make me masochistic?
I want you with all my heart and soul,and everything I used to own
It's yours now, throw it all away, I need only you to stay
But...I know...
Don't kiss me, I know you don't want to

Don't listen,send them all to hell
You know I'll always guard your back when you don't care
I love you
But you're just not supposed to know
I'll let you go

Circumstances don't allow us as they do allow the others
We spilled so much blood throughout our eyes

It stings,and itches all the way to hell
Now god's informed about my complex shell
And I don't want- the spotlight makes me sweat
My clothes they're transparent and wet

I feel so naked,I feel it to my very bone
Then I see you...
It's still just too cold!
©2004-2009 ~Angeliq
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Author's Comments

This is maybe the most honest poem I've written so far. It is made up from several thoughts and situations in my darkest period so if want to comment it,please read the whole thing...

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:icondark-tourniquet:
It's pretty poetry for a dark period, but the best ones come from those. =P I really like this.

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:iconfu-rin-ka-zan:
great job...wow...ur poetry is...wow...*speechless for once*

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^i have been programmed to say that...

don't ya wish the edit-undo command applied to real life? :slow:

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:icondiscanthus:
It's most definately a poem that has that quality of your own inner self and it's gorgeously done. i really love ths sing song way that the first stanza opens and then the sort of low note tha tit all ends on. Very well done, as always, thought the interpretation of this poem in its entirety remains a mysetery to me.

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Chris Your Friendly Neighbourhood Psycho

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