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Silence woke me from my sleep.These awkward bubbles of nothing in the morning just before the alarm clock rings and everything starts making this horrible kind of crystal clear sense again.
My cold legs begin dragging my comatic body to the bathroom,where the last layers of my narcotic haze gets scratched off my twitching eyes as I wake,blinded by the sterile white of the bathroom tiles as gravity kicks the door in like an unwelcome friend.

Phantom sparks of familiar feelings rush through my body,the faint memory of a dream,and I try to remember,but it's gone...I'm alone,and it feels good at first...but then,this thorn in the back of my bra

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Halo Effect

by ~Angeliq, Apr 10, 2005, 9:05:02 AM
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse

Halo Effect

Come down divine
Beauty
And scatter around me
Render me worthy
Of this agony and
Dig into me slowly
Time and time around
I see...
And I feel
So ugly around you

Come down divine
Beauty
Make your flawless image
Rain down before me
To baptize this sinful eye of mine

Time and time around

I see
All the things that make you perfect
The surface broken rotten
Shattering this mirror
And cutting through my unclean skin
Leaving bloody trails behind
And the image you reflect
Turns out to be a halo effect

Come down divine
No strings to make you fly this time
What does it feel like when there's
Nothing left to hide behind

Come down divine
Beauty
And scatter around me
Render me worthy
Of this agony

Halo Effectby ~Angeliq

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse

...I've rather submitted this into the 'human nature' category than into 'spiritual' poetry because this poem isn't directly religiously flanked although it has a bit of religious scenery...

~Death-Moose Aug 20, 2005

that's awesome!

~baaka-yaro May 9, 2005 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

OMG , i love the trippines in this one, it's really something else, the colors are amazing...

~CloudNeroZ Apr 22, 2005 Photographer

Both are very nice.

!kalix Apr 19, 2005 Photographer

brilliant images created

~krunce Apr 17, 2005

definitely gorgeous - it has almost a lilting stacatto effect to it (yes, I realize that is almost entirely oxymoronic), but it really does:
'come down divine' - it hops and skips at the same time as it flows
lovely use of repetition - makes my eye skim up and down the poem (in a good way)
love it - +fav without a doubt

~Mut3DFaith Apr 16, 2005

It's a beauty! I'll be checking out some more of your work.

~Mut3DFaith Apr 16, 2005

It's a beauty! I'll be checking out some more of your work.

~Absalom0 Apr 15, 2005

not to sound repetitious of other comments but very lyrical. Well written and simply beautiful

~AnitsircCAF Apr 15, 2005 Hobbyist Digital Artist

wooo...!!! is so beautiful.....^^ great work

~JadePrince Apr 11, 2005

I've noticed other people have said this, but they really do sound like lyrics of a song. I only wish I were more musically inclined, I can -almost- hear the music behind it.

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Something about the phrase "render me worthy" is very appealing. I like that.

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